Man Versus Stones and Onions
Jacob
Haas
Man often spends his time separated from nature,
sometimes trying to understand it or fighting against it. Wislawa Szymborska
attempts to embody the conflicting natures of humans and mother nature in two of
her poems, Conversation with a Stone
and The Onion. While she displays the
conflict between humans and nature, Szymborska writes about the apparent
superiority of nature. Szymborska seems to say that while human curiosity may
try to understand and control nature, the natural order will be one step ahead
and prove to be better than mankind.
The first poem by Wislawa Szymborska, Conversation with a Stone, tells a story
about a character who attempts to “gain entrance” into the stone by “knock(ing)
at the stone’s front door.” The knocking on the “stone’s front door” can be
read as the human’s desire to discover the stone’s (nature) secrets. With this
reading, we can see the human trying again and again to coax the stone into
granting him entrance; while the stone repeatedly denies the character what he
wants (Conversation with a Stone).
This can be compared to a scientist attempting to learn from nature through
research, trying again and again in order to discover something about nature
with nature attempting to safeguard its secrets.
Looking at the scientist-like narrator, we can see the
curious and persistent human attempting to solve a puzzle and gain knowledge that
nature believes is not ready and does not want to give up. The line “I knock at
the stone’s front door,” which is repeated throughout the bulk of the poem
shows the persistence of the man attempting to discover nature’s secrets
through the stone (Conversation with a
Stone). These repeated lines can be seen to stand for the humans repeated
attempts, continuing to solve the stone like a puzzle to be rewarded with the
knowledge within nature.
This persistence can be paired with human curiosity,
which is displayed through the human character in the poem. With his
persistence, the human voices his curiosity by asking if he can see the many
different things inside the stone. He also says early in the poem “I’ve come
out of pure curiosity. / Only life can quench it” while asking for entrance
into the stone’s “palace” (Conversation
with a Stone). These lines seem to indicate both the curiosity of man, but
also the character’s goals. He seems to be saying that while he comes out of
curiosity, he wants to learn the secrets of the stone, nature, and life by
doing so.
These grand empty halls or palace inside the stone could
be seen to represent the vast knowledge to be gained from gaining entrance into
the scientific discoveries within nature, in this case the stone. Although
there is much knowledge within the secrets of nature which could benefit
humans, nature or the stone is not going to give up its secrets easily. The
narrator of the story shows great persistence in attempting to pry into the
rock to attain the secrets held within, but persistence is apparently not what
is needed in order to discover the secrets in the secret halls of the stone. The
stone references this lack of the wisdom needed to attain knowledge of nature
near the middle of the poem, saying that the “palace” is “Beautiful, perhaps,
but not to the taste / of your poor senses” (Conversation with a Stone). This is a reference to the unrefined
intelligence or wisdom already gained by humans, but it is not enough to gain
access to more knowledge hidden deep within the stone, within nature. The stone
continues this argument soon afterwards when he informs the narrator that “You
lack the sense of taking part. / No other sense can make up for your missing
sense of / taking part” (Conversation
with a Stone). By saying this to the narrator who is bent on discovering
the secrets within the stone, it informs the human that he is not yet ready to
learn what nature hides. Even though humans are persistent, persistence is not
the skill required to attain natural enlightenment but rather a different kind
of wisdom is required to fully comprehend the knowledge bound within the rock.
The
stone, like it does not believe that the human is ready for such knowledge,
repeatedly does not grant the man to “enter [its] insides, / have a look
around, / breathe [his] fill of [it]” or access to the hidden secrets and
natural knowledge within its possession (Conversation
with a Stone). While the stone is subtle and gives hints that the man will
never discover the secrets he desires, denying him entrance over and over and
also stating that not even leaves, water, and hair, other natural forces, would
surrender their secrets to the man’s curious questioning. The man, being
persistent, does not stop even though it is becoming apparent that he will not
gain any ground in this endeavor, so the stone finally made the man realize his
flaw and reason he is not ready for the knowledge within by saying “I don’t
have a door” (Conversation with a Stone).
Using this as the final line of the poem creates a feeling of a sudden and
abrupt end, which is what the stone caused the man to have. By causing the
human character to realize that he made a crucial error while starting his
questioning, he proves that since the man cannot possibly be ready for the
secrets that lie beneath the surface of the rock because of the lack of
understanding something simple.
Szymborska’s
second poem, The Onion, has a
different but similar tone than Conversation
with a Stone. The Onion offers a
point of view relatively free from human characters, allowing the poet to focus
completely on the superiority of nature, in this case: onions.
In
The Onion, Szymborska puts on the
mindset of the “devout onionist” in order to project an air of superiority onto
the onions. All of her hearty descriptions of the onion, from its simple
anatomy to the many onions inside onions, indicate her belief that the onion is
“the greatest success story” (The Onion).
While the onions are compared to people on a couple occasions, the onions are
shown as being a superior natural entity than that of the humans. Through its
simplicity, it seems to be superior even with our more complex compositions. It
is almost like the poem is saying that while humans are more superior
organically, the onion is more superior by being simple and incorruptible.
Together,
both poems display a theme of man versus nature, with nature being represented by
the “wise” stone and the “perfect” onion. Both Conversation with a Stone and The
Onion put natural entities on the pedestal above humanity, saying that man
might not be ready to understand the wisdom that nature has to offer. Their
themes together bring together a story of its own, in which the curious humans
attempt to understand beings more superior than them in the eyes of nature.
While
humans attempt to understand these more advanced, natural beings, they seem to
taunt them with their hidden natural secrets and simple perfection. People are
always trying to better themselves; in these poems it is no different. The
character in the first story tries to learn from the stone, which might seem
wise at first, until he realizes that he lacks the initial knowledge necessary
to gain wisdom from the stone. This idea can be paired with the analysis of The Onion in that while the onion might
appear to be simple, it can also be seem as superior. Try as they might, humans
will never be capable of attaining a similar type of perfection like that of
the onions.
In the poems by Wislawa Szymborska, we can see the
conflict between mankind and mother nature. While humans wish to study and
understand the simple perfections in the natural world, it is difficult or impossible
to understand their wisdom. With the stone, we can learn that although the
stones themselves might have seen many things, the things they have seen are
not open for man to view and observe. Meanwhile, the onion presents a different
yet similar message with simplicity. Humans cannot attain the physical and
organic simplicity of the onion, but it could be a message that humans will be
better off if they stick to being simple and humble in their way of life.
Together the poems show us that humans seem like a young species, trying to
learn from the master, nature, with it always being just barely out of reach.
Works
Cited
Szymborska, Wislawa.
“Conversation with a Stone.”
Szymborska, Wislawa.
“The Onion.”
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